Hi everyone,
In case you haven't checked your email, our lecture on Wednesday, February 18 from 12:30-1:45 is via Zoom (link HERE). I woke up with a cold/flu and don't want to come to campus to infect everyone.
See you soon!
Hi everyone,
In case you haven't checked your email, our lecture on Wednesday, February 18 from 12:30-1:45 is via Zoom (link HERE). I woke up with a cold/flu and don't want to come to campus to infect everyone.
See you soon!
Scholarly Research Training Workshop: Wednesday, January 21 from 12:30-1:45 in lecture with Heather Nisen.
Mechanics of a Formal Research Workshop: Monday, February 2 from 12:30-1:45 in lecture.
Paper Format (PAPER TOPIC HERE):
QUESTIONS TO ASK YOURSELF WHEN WRITING & EDITING YOUR PAPER:
1) Do I have the proper number of citations and sources?
2) Did I properly format my citations using MLA or Chicago?
3) Do I have a properly formatted formal bibliography?
4) Did I adhere to the proper paper length?
5) Do I have a clear, and specific thesis statement?
6) Does my thesis statement specifically relate to the final draft of my paper?
7) Did I run spell check (repeatedly)?
8) Did I carefully edit to make sure that I used proper grammar, and were my tenses consistent?
9) Did I formulate clear arguments and substantiate all of my claims with clear and concrete examples?
10) Did I avoid sweeping generalizations and vague assertions?
11) Did I use casual colloquial language in my formal research paper? If so, find more precise ways to describe the point being made.
12) Did I use scholarly research sources such as peer-reviewed journal articles, scholarly articles and books rather than sources such as blogs, Wikipedia, encyclopedias etc (that are not acceptable sources for a formal research paper).
13) Did I properly cite quotes and summaries of other people's intellectual property (footnotes and in-text citations)?
14) Did I avoid excessive biographical information about the artist? Instead I should only include biographical information that is directly relevant to their artistic practice.
15) Would anyone reading my paper understand what I am trying to convey, or do I need to more clearly define the scope of my research and ultimately the point of my paper?
16) Did I place the pictures at the end of my paper? If I embedded them in the text, I need to remove them and place them at the end of my paper.
17) Did I remember to put my name, perm number and section time on my paper?
18) Did I remember to frequently save, backup and email drafts of my paper to myself (just in case my computer crashes)?
19) When I had questions, or needed help, did I reach out to my TA, professor or CLAS?
GENERAL TIPS ON WRITING YOUR PAPER:
1) The selection of a good thesis and supporting examples is an important part of producing a good paper. Be selective. The paper is about how to look closely at works of art and how your evaluation of objects and images is expanded by the specific context in which they are presented.
2) Write primarily with nouns and verbs. Avoid unnecessary (especially vague and imprecise) adjectives and adverbs.
3) Revise and rewrite. Proofread your work. Do not rely solely on "spell check."
4) Use the dictionary to refer to words you do not fully understand.
5) Do not overstate, or excessively use qualifiers (such as very, rather, little, etc.).
6) Use orthodox diction and accurate spelling. ("Its" is possessive; "It's" is a contraction for "it is," "Its' " doesn't exist. "Their" is possessive, "They're" is a contraction of "they are," There is declarative).
7) Be clear. Make references clearly. (Do not use the word "this" as the subject of a sentence).
8) Do not let your opinions get in the way of your writing.
9) Avoid using Wikipedia, blogs, newspaper articles and other materials that are not scholarly. These ARE NOT research materials for a formal research paper.
10) Get to the point quickly. Concentrate on quality of writing not quantity of words.
11) For help with formatting MLA and Chicago citations, visit Purdue Owl: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/purdue_owl.html
For help writing the paper contact CLAS at 893-3269. They have a writing lab that will help you with papers, and will even proofread your papers. They also offer help specifically to students for whom English is a second language. CLAS site: http://www.clas.sa.ucsb.edu/
1. Attention to the Prompt – 30 points
● 30–27: Fully addresses all aspects of the prompt with depth and clarity
● 26–23: Addresses most aspects of the prompt, some areas underdeveloped
● 22–19: Limited engagement with the prompt, missing key elements
● 18–0: Off-topic or does not address the prompt
2. Implementation of Previously Given Feedback – 30 points
● 30–27: Clearly incorporates feedback, major improvement shown
● 26–23: Feedback is partially incorporated, some issues remain
● 22–19: Minimal evidence of applying feedback
● 18–0: No evidence of applying feedback
3. Writing Mechanics (Grammar, Punctuation, Citation) – 20 points
● 20–18: Grammatically correct, proper punctuation, citations correct in style (MLA/Chicago)
● 17–15: Minor errors, but meaning remains clear
● 14–12: Frequent errors that occasionally hinder clarity
● 11–0: Serious errors that obscure meaning or incorrect/missing citations
4. Structure & Formatting – 5 points
● 5: Clear sentence structure, logical flow, and coherent paragraphs
● 4: Mostly clear, some awkward phrasing or organization issues
● 3–2: Frequent structural issues that hinder readability
● 1–0: Lacks coherence and structure
5. Adherence to Due Date (Weekly Writing Assignments Only) – 5 points
● 5 points: Submitted on time
● 3 points: Submitted late but within 24 hours
● 1 point: Submitted 1–2 days late
● 0 points: Submitted more than 48 hours late (results in a score of 0/100 for the entire assignment)
Note: Research papers require prior approval from the instructor for extensions. Late submissions without approved extensions may receive a score of 0.
● Incorrect font size (–2)
● Incorrect spacing (–2)
● Missing page numbers (–2)
● Other formatting issues (–1 to –4 at instructor’s discretion)
Total Possible: 100 points
Hello everyone,
Welcome to Art 1A: Visual Literacy! I wanted to reach out to let you know that everything that you need to know about Art 1A will be posted here on the Art 1A website, not on Canvas. Please read everything carefully, I will go over this information in class when we meet, and I will answer any questions that you may have.